Another one. Is this already suit with concept you expect? Then would you like to give me feedback so that I will be able to develop my designs? e.g. font, color, proportion, etc. Thank you! Kind regards, JongJawi.
Dear Elymatt, I've read your brief then please let me show you my submission here. I hope you'll like it. Then I will wait for your feedback to help me make it better. Thank you! Regards, JongJawi.